仿古诗
诗词好的朋友帮着修改<div><br><div><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 21px; ">桃篇 （忆贵妃）<div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; "> <div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; "><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; "><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; ">旧时宫闱有桃轩， 片点丹彩漫御苑，</div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; ">梢下宫妃问君安， 翩然入眼赛蝶仙。</div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; ">花中不闻九州喧， 花外几近岁华落， </div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; ">马嵬坡下空遗怨， 层层华影悼玉颜。</div></div></div></div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; "><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; "><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; "><br style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; "></div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; ">诗大意：杨贵妃酷爱桃花， 所以在宫里种了一片桃林，并在花下为唐明皇起舞， 翩然舞姿宛如蝴蝶仙子。花下得他们不闻外界战乱，花外好时光不再， 佳人在马嵬坡香消玉殒，徒见层层花影伤逝佳人</div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; "><br style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; "></div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; ">桃篇 （殇）</div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; "><br style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; "></div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; "><br style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; "></div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; ">四月清明后，殷红多喧妍。</div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; ">姝女闻马嘶，与君不期逢。</div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; ">桃红半遮面，问君何所思。</div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; ">君道无所忧，心声不可言。</div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; ">二人分道行，音信难再续。</div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; ">君心苦不堪，寄思于悲弦。</div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; ">返景会佳颜，缤红多凋残。</div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; ">佳人亦已去，相思摧红颜。</div></div></div></span></div><div><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 21px; "><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; ">诗大意： 这是首叙事诗</div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; "><br style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; "></div><div style="font-family: 宋体, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; line-height: 1.5; ">据传唐朝书生崔护，清明时节去郊外踏青，在一桃林内偶遇一少女，此时桃花正开，少女的面颊被桃花映的粉红，格外动人。崔护向这位少女要了一碗水喝，随即离去，但少女的容颜久久不能忘怀。第二年清明，崔护又来到那桃林，却只见桃花不见少女，原来少女竟因相思他，郁郁而逝了，崔护大痛。</div></span></div></div> 这境界，拜读！有时候诗词在情感深处才能写出来，平常确实有点难。<img src="image/face/1.gif" class="face"> <div class="quote"><span class="q"><b>邹玉山(印度尼西亚)</b>: 才女啊！献丑一句：依稀（已是）清明后，姹红伴喧妍。忽闻骏马嘶，郎君突入眼。（好像是从女性的角度写的啊），如果是男性，可以改为：时节清明后，信马撷春光。</span></div>谢谢
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